英语写作练习002

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Friday,August 11st,2023,Sunny

Opened the calendar on the wall,"August 8th" is sticked on it, making me anxious like the past everytime.I'm so tired,so weak,and so frustrated.

What I most thirsty for now is "REGULAR",which could give me the chance to success,but I just could't do it.It's so hard for lonely me.Every night,the soft pillow like a gift for my solitary soul,I'm just feeling so fucking hard in this period time.

Tonight I went out,and ran along with the housing estate's edge."300 meters,500 meters...",watching the distance I ran away,with the heartbeat number increasing 197 per second,I felt my head becoming more and more heavy,and so much sweater on my eyes.I stopped finally, making every endeavor to pant for more air.Although my body was so heavy,my mood likely became so light.

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